Screen Writers master class talk back

Had the last day of my Thesis screen writers workshop and it was really a great experience. Half the class showed up but it made it an intimate experience. I will post my notes from the class later tonight or tomorrow night and I will also post my syllabus. I feel that I have the bones of my thesis but the meat needs to be built up a bit. I really liked my friend mikes comment of  recording myself reading my treatment. The pacing of my thesis is very important. It starts out really slow and builds into a frenzy at the end. I really liked my teachers comment that the last shot when the car runs off the cliff needs to be really epic and beautiful with the starts and the moon. Also my magnet sheets came in today I cant wait to make some fun test pieces. I will take photos of the process this week and post in detail! Take care and stay tuned I will have a ton to post soon.